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(Images by Rory, Vocabulary by Jasmine, Glossary by Connor and Kelsey, Questions by Ian)

 

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Over the last few years, I have asked hundreds of college students, "When was the country we now know as the United States first settled?"

That is a generous way of putting the question. Surely "we now know as" implies that the original settlement happened before the United States. I had hoped that students would suggest 30,000 BC, or some other pre-Columbian date. They did not. Their consensus answer was "1620."

 

Part of the problem is the word "settle." "Settlers" were white. Indians did not settle. Nor are students the only people misled by "settle." One recent Thanksgiving weekend, I listened as a guide at the Statue of Liberty told about European immigrants "populating a wild East Coast." As we shall see, however, if Indians had not already settled New England, Europeans would have had a much tougher job of it.

 

Starting with the PilgrimsPilgrims not only leaves out the Indians, but also the Spanish. In the summer of 1526 five hundred Spaniards and one hundred black slaves founded a town near the mouth of the Pedee River in what is now South Carolina. Disease and disputes with nearby Indians caused many deaths. Finally, in November the slaves rebelled, killed some of their masters, and escaped to the Indians. By now only 150 Spaniards survived, and they evacuated back to Haiti. The ex-slaves remained behind. So the first non-Native settlers in "the country we now know as the United States" were Africans.

 

The Spanish continued their settling in 1565, when they massacred a settlement of French Protestants at St. Augustine, Florida, and replaced it with their own fort [map]. Some Spanish were pilgrims, seeking regions new to them to secure religious liberty: these were Spanish Jews, who settled in New Mexico in the late 1500s. Few Americans know that one third of the United States, from San Francisco to Arkansas to Natchez to Florida, has been Spanish longer than it has been "American." [map] Moreover, Spanish culture left an indelible impact on the West. The Spanish introduced horses, cattle, sheep, pigs, and the basic elements of cowboy culture, including its vocabulary: mustang, bronco, rodeo, lariat, and so on. [cowboy images]

 

Beginning with 1620 also omits the Dutch, who were living in what is now Albany by 1614 [map]. Indeed, 1620 is not even the date of the first permanent British settlement, for in 1607, the London Company sent settlers to Jamestown,

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  Virginia. No matter. The mythic origin of "the country we now know as the United States" is at Plymouth Rock

and the year is 1620. My students are not at fault. The myth is what their textbooks and their culture have offered them. I examined how twelve textbooks used in high school American history classes teach Thanksgiving. Here is the version in one high school history book, THE AMERICAN TRADITION:

After some exploring, the Pilgrims chose the land around Plymouth Harbor [map] for their settlement. Unfortunately, they had arrived in December and were not prepared for the New England winter. However, they were aided by friendly Indians, who gave them food and showed them how to grow corn. When warm weather came, the colonists planted, fished, hunted, and prepared themselves for the next winter. After harvesting their first crop, they and their Indian friends celebrated the first Thanksgiving.

 

My students also learned that the Pilgrims were persecuted in England for their religion, so they moved to Holland. They sailed on the Mayflower to America and wrote the Mayflower Compact [image]. Times were rough, until they met Squanto [image]. He taught them how to put fish in each corn hill, so they had a bountiful harvest.

But when I ask them about the plague, they stare back at me. "What plague? The Black Plague?" No, that was three centuries earlier, I sigh.

 

Vocabulary:

Consensus- To come to a general agreement.

Disputes- To argue about.

Indelible- Something that can not be eliminated, erased or forgotten.

Lariat-A long noosed rope used to catch horses, cattle, or other livestock.

Omit- Fail to include; leave out.

Aided- The act or result of helping.

pre-Columbian

persecuted



Questions:

 

  1. The Spanish brought over basic elements of what culture to the west? And introducing what animals to the west?( 1 )

 

 

  1. What were the reasons that the five hundred Spaniard dwindled down to one hundred and fifty? What did they do because of these reasons?( 3 )

 

 

  1. What information would you use to support the idea that the English settlements were better off than the Spanish?( 5 )

 

4. According to the author, what improvements should be made to  U.S. history textbooks in order to provide a more truthful account of our past? (Level V - Synthesis)

 


Additional Resources

  

A great video looking at the American immigration debate...in the 1620's.


 

Feedback Rubric

 

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Answer each question by placing the appropriate number next to the question:

4 = Yes, always!     3 = Yes, for the most part.

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Underline the grade you think the student deserves.

 

Vocabulary

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  • Do the definitions make sense in the context the term is being used? 4
  • Are the terms and definitions placed in the correct area of the page and are they easy to access? 4

Choice

  • Are all the difficult terms defined? 3
If not, then put these words in bold and place them in the vocab section.

good job very clear, and words were underlined 

 

4/4

 A-

 

cody

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done. 

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.

 

Glossary

Effectiveness 

  • Are the glossary pages informative? 4
  • Are the glossary pages brief and to the point (succinct)? Less than 250 words? 4
  • Do the glossary pages help you to understand the main reading?  Do they relate directly to the main text? 4
  • Are the glossary pages engaging (clear organization, use of media, etc) 3

Choice

  • Are all the neccessary glossary terms linked to a glossary page? 3

If not, please change the text color of those terms that need an explanation to red.

Citations

  • Is all information borrowed from other resources properly cited? 4

good job

 

3/4

 A-

CARL

 

B

 

 

 

Some images wouldn't hurt...

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done. 

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Questions

Effectiveness

  • Is each question from a different level of Bloom's taxonomy? 2
  • Is each question clearly labeled with the level type? 0
  • Are the questions clear and easy to understand? 3

Choice

  • Do the questions require the reader to understand the most important information in the text? 2
If not, then what question(s) would you ask?  Place your questions in red.

good job

 

4/4

C

 

chunri and Bobby

Question 3 was unclear.

 

Questions don't discuss the main point of this section.

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Images

Relevance & Choice

  • Do your images relate, in a direct way, to the most important material in the text? 4
  • Are their an appropriate number of images?  If too many, then which can we lose?  If too few, then what do we need images of? Put needed images or graphics in [bolded brackets]. 3

Effectiveness

  • Do your images enhance the text and help the reader come to a deeper understanding of the text? 3
  • Are the images placed wisely and sized appropriately?  Do they go with the flow of the text or do they interrupt the flow? 2

Citations

  • Is all your information properly cited? Are all images hyperlinked to the URL address of the image? 3

could have added some pictures.

 

logan

 B

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Overall

 

3/4

 

B+

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

A-

B+

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

B-

C+

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

C-

D+

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.

 

 

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