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(Images by Logan, Vocabulary by cody, Glossary by Carl, Questions by Bobby and chunri )

 

Enhancements

 Should we teach these truths about Thanksgiving? Or, like our textbooks, should we look the other way? Again quoting LAND OF PROMISE. "By the fall  of 1621, colonists and Indians could sit down to several days of feast and thanksgiving to God (later celebrated as the first Thanksgiving)."

 

Throughout the nation, elementary school children still enact Thanksgiving every fall as our national origin myth, complete with Pilgrim hats made of construction paper and Indian braves with feathers in their hair. [image] An early Massachusetts colonist, Colonel Thomas Aspinwall, advises us not to settle for this whitewash of feel - good - history.

 

"It is painful to advert to these things. But our forefathers, though wise, pious, and sincere, were nevertheless, in respect to Christian charity, under a cloud; and, in history, truth should be held sacred, at whatever cost."

 

 

Thanksgiving is full of embarrassing facts. The Pilgrims did not introduce the Native Americans to the tradition; Eastern Indians had observed autumnal harvest celebrations for centuries. Our modern celebrations date back only to 1863; not until the 1890s did the Pilgrims get included in the tradition; no one even called them "Pilgrims" until the 1870s. PlymouthRock achieved ichnographic status only in the nineteenth century, when some enterprising residents of the town moved it down to the water so its significance as the "holy soil" the Pilgrims first touched might seem more plausible. The Rock has become a shrine [image], The Mayflower Compact a sacred text, and our textbooks play the same function as the Anglican Book Of Common Prayer, teaching us the rudiments of the civil religion of Thanksgiving.

 

 

Indians are marginalized in this civic ritual. Our archetypal image of the first Thanksgiving portrays the groaning boards in the woods, with the Pilgrims in their starched Sunday best and the almost naked Indian guests. Thanksgiving silliness reaches some sort of zenith in the handouts that school children have carried home for decades, with captions like, "They served pumpkins and turkeys and corn and squash. The Indians had never seen such a feast!" When his son brought home this "information" from his New Hampshire elementary school, Native American novelist Michael Dorris pointed out "the Pilgrims had literally never seen `such a feast,' since all foods mentioned are exclusively indigenous to the Americas and had been provided by [or with the aid of] the local tribe."

 

I do not read Aspinwall as suggesting a "bash the Pilgrims" interpretation, emphasizing only the bad parts. I have emphasized untoward details only because our histories have suppressed everything awkward for so long. The Pilgrims' courage in setting forth in the late fall to make their way on a continent new to them remains unsurpassed. In their first year, like the Indians, they suffered from diseases. Half of them died. The Pilgrims did not cause the plague and were as baffled as to its true origin as the stricken Indian villagers. Pilgrim-Indian relations began reasonably positively. Thus the antidote to feel-good history is not feel-bad history, but honest and inclusive history. "Knowing the truth about Thanksgiving, both its proud and its shameful motivations and history, might well benefit contemporary children," suggests Dorris. "But the glib retelling of an ethnocentric and self-serving falsehood does no one any good." Because Thanksgiving has roots in both Anglo and Native cultures, and because of the interracial cooperation the first celebration enshrines, Thanksgiving might yet develop into a holiday that promotes tolerance and understanding. Its emphasis on Native foods provides a teachable moment, for natives of the Americas first developed half of the world's food crops. Texts could tell this--only three even mention Indian foods---and could also relate other contributions from Indian societies, from sports to political ideas. The original Thanksgiving itself provides an interesting example: the Natives and newcomers spent the better part of three days showing each other their various recreations.

 

Origin myths do not come cheaply. To glorify the Pilgrims is dangerous. The genial omissions and false details our texts use to retail the Pilgrim legend promote Anglocentrism, which only handicaps us when dealing with all those whose culture is not Anglo. Surely, in history, "truth should be held sacred, at whatever cost."

 

 

Reproduced with permission from James W. Loewen

 

 

    You now  

Vocabulary:

 

Pious: Having or showing a dutiful spirit of reverence for God or an earnest wish to fulfill religious obligations.

 

 

Advert: To remark or comment (to discuss)

 

 

Ichnographic: of great importance.

Should be Iconographic - of great importance.

 

 

Marginalized: To place in a position of marginal importance, influence, or power.

 

 

Omission: Something left out

 

enterprising: ready to undertake projects of importance or difficulty, or untried schemes; energetic in carrying out any undertaking.

 

plausible:well-spoken.

 

rudiments: first slight appearance.

 

archetypal: the original pattern or model from which all things of the same kind are copied or on which they are based.

 

zenith: he point on the celestial sphere vertically above a given position or observer.

 

indigenous:Native.


antidote:a medicine or other remedy for counteracting the effects of poison, disease, etc.

 

contemporary:existing, occurring, or living at the same time; belonging to the same time.

 

Genial:cordial.

 

Anglocentrism: Centered or focused on England or the English.

 

Questions:

Why was thanksgiving important in out history?

 

 

What do you think the indians were thinking during the first thanks giving? What about the pilgrims?

 

Do you think that this would have been different if the settlers were no pilgrims, but spanish? Why?

 

 

What do you think would happen if the indians has never shown Pilgrims how to plant the crops?

 

What was the author's main point in the final paragraph.  Do you agree or disagree, WHY?

 

 

 


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The vocab was well understood, yet you might want to put the vocab words in bold so that its easier to find.

 

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= B All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

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Glossary

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Citations

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4 Yes they were imformiable

3 They had alot of information and most was not needed

3 For the most part they help yes

4 Yes they were organized

4 Yes

2 on some of them i did not see any

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Some important glossary items were missed.  The link to Anglican Book of Prayer was non-existant.  The link to New Hampshire was unecesary and way too long.

 

D

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Questions

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  • Are the questions clear and easy to understand? 3 (check spelling)

Choice

  • Do the questions require the reader to understand the most important information in the text? 3

If not, then what question(s) would you ask?

                Effectivness-

3 Some of the questions were similar.

 

0 None of the questions were labeled with the level type

4 All of the questions were clear and easy to understand

4 They required the reader to look into the text to find the answers

3 Some vocabulary errors

 

C+

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Images Adam

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Effectiveness

  • Do your images enhance the text and help the reader come to a deeper understanding of the text?3 3
  • Are the images placed wisely and sized appropriately?  2 Do they go with the flow of the text or do they interrupt the flow?2

Citations

  • Is all your information properly cited? Are all images hyperlinked to the URL address of the image?0 4

Missing citations

3 pictures of pretty much the same thing.

 

B+

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.
 

Overall

 

C+

A = All of the requirements are met and the work is extremely well done.

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B+

B = All of the requirements are met and the work is well done.

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C+

C = All of the requirements are done and are acceptable or the work is well done but some of the requirements are missing,

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D = Some of the requirements are missing and the work  generally needs some improvement.

F = There is not enough work or the work is too poorly done.

 

 

 

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